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The House

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By Mark GrahamPublished 2 years ago 1 min read
old house (pexels.com)

There was an old house sitting out in the country. It hasn't been lived in for quite some time. Some say it was owned by a woman that just couldn't let go of it. Over the years the doors fell off and the windows broke and they fell out. The yard became overgrown and turned brown along with the tree that stood out front even withered and died. The women owner still did not want to give up the house of where she grew up. If you look through the open windows and doors, you will see a family picture.

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Mark Graham

I am a person who really likes to read and write and to share what I learned with all my education. My page will mainly be book reviews and critiques of old and new books that I have read and will read. There will also be other bits, too.

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  • Cindy Calder2 years ago

    I like the way the old house can also be a symbol of the old woman. Lovely little piece.

  • Lana V Lynx2 years ago

    I feel for old neglected houses as if they are uncared for babies.

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