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The Train That Never Stops

Arman had always hated traveling at night.

By Salman WritesPublished about 18 hours ago 4 min read
Picture Created by Leonardo.ai

There was something about the silence of empty stations that gnawed at him. The flickering fluorescent lights, the echo of his footsteps on long, deserted platforms, the way shadows seemed to stretch unnaturally across tiled floors—it all felt wrong. The night belonged to things unseen, and Arman had always believed that traveling through it was an invitation to meet them.

But that night, he had no choice.

The last train home was leaving at 11:50 PM.

He reached the station just in time.

Strangely, the place was completely empty. No passengers. No staff. Not even a ticket collector. Only one train stood at the platform. Old. Rusty. Its doors open. Waiting.

Arman hesitated.

“This doesn’t look right…” he whispered.

But his phone showed the same train number. Same departure time.

He stepped inside.

The moment he entered, the doors slammed shut behind him.

THUD.

Arman spun around. “Hello?”

No response.

The inside of the train was dimly lit. Seats were worn out, their cushions torn and leaking yellowed foam. Windows were coated in grime, as though they hadn’t been cleaned in decades. The air felt cold. Too cold.

He walked down the aisle. Car after car—empty. Not a single person.

“This is weird…”

He sat down near the window. The train suddenly jerked, then started moving. Slowly. Then faster. The station disappeared into darkness.

At first, everything seemed normal. Just a late-night train ride. But then—Arman noticed something strange.

The train didn’t stop.

No stations. No signals. Nothing. Just endless tracks.

“Maybe it’s an express train,” he muttered. But even express trains stop somewhere. This one didn’t.

He checked his phone. No signal. Time: 12:17 AM. The same time it had been for the last ten minutes.

“Battery glitch?” He restarted it. Still the same. Time wasn’t moving.

Suddenly—

A voice came from the speaker above.

“Next stop… does not exist.”

Arman froze.

“What?”

The announcement repeated.

“Next stop… does not exist.”

His heart started racing. “Okay… this is not funny.”

He stood up and moved toward the next compartment. As he opened the door—he saw someone. Sitting alone. Facing away from him.

Arman’s chest tightened. “Finally… someone else.”

He walked closer. “Excuse me… do you know what’s going on?”

The person didn’t respond. Just sat there. Still.

Arman reached out. Touched his shoulder.

The figure slowly turned.

Arman stumbled back.

It was him.

Same face. Same clothes. But pale. Lifeless. Eyes hollow.

“You boarded the wrong train,” the other Arman said calmly.

“What… what is this place?”

The other version tilted his head. “This train doesn’t take passengers.”

“Then what does it take?”

A pause. Then—

“Time.”

The lights flickered violently. The train shook. The windows turned black. No outside. No tracks. Just darkness.

Arman ran back toward his seat. But the compartments had changed. Longer. Twisted. Endless. Doors led to the same place again and again. The train had become a maze.

Then he heard it.

Footsteps. Behind him. Slow. Heavy.

He turned.

Something was walking down the aisle. Tall. Too tall. Its head almost touching the ceiling. Its body stretched unnaturally, joints bending the wrong way. Its face hidden in shadow.

Arman’s breath caught. “What are you?”

The creature stopped. Then spoke.

“You stayed too long.”

The train suddenly slowed. A loud screech echoed. The voice returned.

“Final stop.”

The doors opened.

Outside—nothing. Just darkness. Endless void.

The other Arman appeared beside him. “This is where you get off.”

“I’m not going there!” Arman shouted.

“You already did,” the other replied.

The creature moved closer. Arman backed toward the open door.

“No… no…”

The ground beneath him vanished. He fell. Into darkness.

But the fall did not end.

Arman tumbled through a black abyss, his body weightless, his screams swallowed by silence. Shapes flickered in the void—faces pressed against invisible glass, hands clawing, whispers echoing in languages he didn’t understand. He glimpsed flashes of other passengers, people who had boarded this train long ago, their eyes hollow like his double.

He landed suddenly, not on ground, but on another train car. The same train. The same seats. The same flickering lights.

But this time, the windows showed something.

Not tracks. Not stations.

Memories.

His childhood home. His first day at school. His mother’s smile. His father’s funeral. His first love. His heartbreak. His regrets.

The train was carrying his life.

And every time it passed a memory, the lights dimmed, the images faded, and the moments disappeared forever.

Arman pressed his hands against the window. “Stop! Please!”

The voice returned.

“This train does not stop.”

Arman realized then—the train wasn’t moving through space. It was moving through him. Through his time. Through his existence.

The creature appeared again, closer now, its shadow stretching across the aisle.

“You boarded the wrong train,” it repeated.

Arman screamed. “Then let me off!”

The other Arman appeared once more, standing beside the creature. His hollow eyes glowed faintly.

“There is no off. Only the end.”

The train screeched again. The announcement echoed.

“Final stop.”

The doors opened.

Outside—his memories were gone. His life erased. Only darkness remained.

The creature pointed.

“This is where you belong.”

Arman’s body trembled. He stepped back, but the floor beneath him dissolved.

He fell again.

This time, there was no end.

The next morning, the station was busy again. Normal. Crowded.

A new passenger waited for the last train.

11:50 PM.

Same platform. Same train.

Doors open.

Waiting.

HorrorMysterythrillerPsychological

About the Creator

Salman Writes

Writer of thoughts that make you think, feel, and smile. I share honest stories, social truths, and simple words with deep meaning. Welcome to the world of Salman Writes — where ideas come to life.

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