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A Warning

To those who will hear

By Raine FielderPublished about 4 hours ago 1 min read
A Warning
Photo by Jose M on Unsplash

Traded water for the wine

A dirty swine mistaken for divine

So, you roll around in all the mud

Disrespecting sacred blood

Does it feel good?

sliding down your throat

Regurgitate his lies

and you’ll start to choke

All the precious years

Going up in smoke

You bought his fiery lies

The mirror now, a tragic joke

A friend and Savior

You turned into a gun

To get the devil’s favor

Golden calf replaced the sun

Is he your chosen slaver

You sold yourselves

Traded gold for breath

Your graves into you delve

Traded life for death

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Raine Fielder

Raine has been writing poetry since she was in seventh grade. She has written several poems, song lyrics, short stories and eight books. Writing is her main purpose.

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I will NEVER use AI for anything I create.

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