I'm just asking.
The brain before you is unhinged, altered from the alleged blueprints the doctors claimed were adequate in the nineties. Though maybe their chart was upside down, who knows? Imagine your 'You' has a permanent view that loses touch like it's raining hats heroes that Warded you. You won't. protection rejection, right? Thought too worthless to your mind to not just get agitated and ghost the very concept. I'd say you can't, but that spite against, I don't know, luck, is making these rules, you know the ones. Feel like a trap to remove our humanity. You want good things, thoughts, my thinking is to keep the bats from joining the cobwebs where the right brain shoves all the rationality. Day-bats, well, winged moves that I do to disguise as one of you. Which is worse: being uncomfortably accepted with poorly worded versions of your descriptions being the only way they reference you, or admit that the silence inside never started, and during conversations like these, you depart entirely? Admit the seclusion is required, admit that 'vibes' are hormone-powered signals shared between guessers overstepping boundaries in sync.
Comments (4)
I enjoyed reading this so much! Very relatable poem!
Great twist. I was led to believe the other would break the vow, but if there’s ever a good reason this is it. Great poem powerful message and much respect
GREAT poem. Although my husband (my ex, that is) never raised his hand to me, he also was never faithful. One day, he just walked out. Decided he wanted someone younger. I vowed to myself that I'd survive and I did! My sons are happily married men but only God knows what might have been in "he" stayed. Thank you for the reminder that we are all strong when we need to be.
This feels devastating, justifiably, during those first few lines, and then ultimately feels very empowering! Well written, Christina! Great entry.