My Eyes
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Love, give.
A drop of life.
Those big
blue eyes of yours.
Only yours.
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Heal me.
Yes, you can.
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Sometimes they cry, sometimes they laugh.
They always look up.
You see far away.
My soul eyes, very deep.
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Don't you wonder.
Your tear
justly seeks to find me.
Because I hurt, my love, I hurt.
Death, for you
I will forever defy.
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You reach out a hand.
You hold me.
Stars in the eyes' seas
when you look at me.
My sweet little one.
I love you so much.
Until the soul
bleeds.
So much.
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I sprout Archangel wings.
When you touch me.
Every dripping wound
immediately siezes.
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From God's hands.
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A/N: I wrote this poem a little while ago, looking at the image of Christ and yours. I love you very much. The only thing I ask for is a kiss from you, on the forehead.
About the Creator
Manuel C.
I have been searching for my soul for years through writing, but I know that in the end, I will find it beside a river.
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This made me so happy to read 😀
this is true love
🌼If love and eternal longing were personified into a poem, it would be this one. Your writing made me feel like everything could be achieved through love and longing.
🌺♦️ Power to the Poem🌺♦️🌺🌺 HUGS 🌺♦️🌺Amazing ♦️🌺🌺
Wow. Again, such a wonderful grip on words you have. I love how simple this poem is, yet how profound it is. I'd love for you to read my poem, "Who Else is Like God, Miguel?" and tell me what you think. I think we have similar passions.