Hope Is the Thing with Feathers, and She Looks Like a Creature Who's Been Through It
Hope is the thing with feathers, and she
looks like a creature
standing thigh-deep in a pile of her own ash and soot,
with watery eyes and she’s choking a little
on the tendrils of smoke still curling up from the black, charred evidence
of the past nine months —
compiled at her sore and clawed, tired and somewhat
unevenly sized feet.
Comments (1)
I don't know why, but this haiku gave me a sense of anxiety. Maybe it was the repeating lines, but it felt like the poem was trying so hard to convince me that I am feeling like myself. (I haven't a clue if that was what you were going for haha) I really liked it! So simple but so effective.