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So

It Goes

By Gerard DiLeoPublished 2 years ago Updated 2 years ago 1 min read

She was so

Mean while

She told me so

Casually, so frequently

She treated me so

Terribly, so cruelly

She hid me so

Carefully, so impossibly

She desired me so

Intensely, so fatally

She buried me so

Deeply, so lovingly

So, and so...

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Gerard DiLeo

Retired, not tired. Hippocampus, behave!

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  • C. Rommial Butler2 years ago

    Suggestion for an alternate title: "Love-Bite". Well-wrought!

  • Cathy holmes2 years ago

    And so that was the end of him. Well done..

  • So she raped him, killed him and then buried him? So sorry if I'm wayyyyy off 😅😅

  • JBaz2 years ago

    This person has mixed emotions and commitment issues

  • Cindy Calder2 years ago

    Talk about visceral.....

  • D. J. Reddall2 years ago

    That fickle, fatally alluring so and so!

  • AWESOME SO STORY!

  • L.C. Schäfer2 years ago

    oooh, that tricksy so and so!

  • Babs Iverson2 years ago

    Awesome surreal poem!!! Loved it!!!❤️❤️💕

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