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The Jewel Thief

Poetic Response to Harper Lewis's Sing to Me! challenge

By Paul Aaron DomenickPublished 7 days ago Updated 6 days ago 1 min read
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Hey, y'all prepare yourself or the rubberband man,

because I’m bound to lose a little control in envisaging a woman

who, like a pomegranate, has tough skin and juicy seeds.

We have not long ago intwined in the yarn of waltz,

and I don’t want my felonious steps to miscarry her.

For she is not that girl who milks in lies-ends

or when chicanery raves the raven.

She is the nameless and the many-named.

With her pithy pawns in place, she will eviscerate you,

but only for the sake of the game.

I couldn’t see, at first, that she rises in the far North,

where gold and incense orbs the cost of the soul.

Just ask Persephone if being queen of the underworld

aggregates the carpels belonging to the same flower,

and she will find a jewel thief, so deft within the canon,

like Emily Dickenson, whose hope is a feather she

gently nudges you with in the classroom, like any kind

mockingbird singing songs for you when your nascent

rise is on the cusp of madness and deliverance undone.

And unafraid to be off target, she revels in the messy erotica

of the hearts, lungs, and swarthy mouths that make us

the sentient bearers of a herstory we live.

So, listen some time to this woman in an ivory dress

who will never masticate your attempts at shame.

And so never will I.

Happy Birthday, and thank you for welcoming me into the

Temple of the Profane.

inspirational

About the Creator

Paul Aaron Domenick

My writing speaks for itself, but in exchange with others, it speaks louder. Thank you for reading and responding to my stories. I enjoy reading yours, usually in the middle of the night :-)

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  • Tim Carmichael5 days ago

    This is powerful and intense. You really capture Harper's strength and presence.

  • Yataki Tumbi6 days ago

    Very nice. Paul, I want to reach u. How?

  • Marilyn Glover6 days ago

    Without a doubt, Paul, you've quickly become one of my favorites on Vocal!!!

  • Harper Lewis7 days ago

    Oh, fuck yeah! You honor me beyond the limits of my humility, and I love you for it! Thank you so much for the intertextuality of my work. *head swrlling*

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