The Jewel Thief
Poetic Response to Harper Lewis's Sing to Me! challenge

Hey, y'all prepare yourself or the rubberband man,
because I’m bound to lose a little control in envisaging a woman
who, like a pomegranate, has tough skin and juicy seeds.
We have not long ago intwined in the yarn of waltz,
and I don’t want my felonious steps to miscarry her.
For she is not that girl who milks in lies-ends
or when chicanery raves the raven.
She is the nameless and the many-named.
With her pithy pawns in place, she will eviscerate you,
but only for the sake of the game.
I couldn’t see, at first, that she rises in the far North,
where gold and incense orbs the cost of the soul.
Just ask Persephone if being queen of the underworld
aggregates the carpels belonging to the same flower,
and she will find a jewel thief, so deft within the canon,
like Emily Dickenson, whose hope is a feather she
gently nudges you with in the classroom, like any kind
mockingbird singing songs for you when your nascent
rise is on the cusp of madness and deliverance undone.
And unafraid to be off target, she revels in the messy erotica
of the hearts, lungs, and swarthy mouths that make us
the sentient bearers of a herstory we live.
So, listen some time to this woman in an ivory dress
who will never masticate your attempts at shame.
And so never will I.
Happy Birthday, and thank you for welcoming me into the
Temple of the Profane.
About the Creator
Paul Aaron Domenick
My writing speaks for itself, but in exchange with others, it speaks louder. Thank you for reading and responding to my stories. I enjoy reading yours, usually in the middle of the night :-)
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Comments (4)
This is powerful and intense. You really capture Harper's strength and presence.
Very nice. Paul, I want to reach u. How?
Without a doubt, Paul, you've quickly become one of my favorites on Vocal!!!
Oh, fuck yeah! You honor me beyond the limits of my humility, and I love you for it! Thank you so much for the intertextuality of my work. *head swrlling*