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The Offering

What stirs in the spaces between sleep and waking

By Tim CarmichaelPublished 5 months ago 1 min read

Cold earth shifts beneath

something pale uncurls, reaching

for the moon's dead light.

Haiku

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Tim Carmichael

I’m a firm believer life is messy, beautiful, and too short, which is why I write poems full of heart and humor. I am an Appalachian poet and cookbook author. My book Beautiful and Brutal Things is on Amazon, Link 👇

https://a.co/d/537XqhW

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  • Aspen Marie 5 months ago

    Spooky and lovely!

  • Sandor Szabo5 months ago

    Very nice, Tim!

  • Darla M Seely5 months ago

    This must be for the eerie haiku challenge. Great eerie haiku

  • K.B. Silver 5 months ago

    👏👏🖤

  • Paul Stewart5 months ago

    Ooh. Eerie!well done, Tim

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