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When Sleep Failed

And its cost

By Michelle Liew Tsui-LinPublished about 4 hours ago β€’ 1 min read
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Today is World Sleep Day, which stresses the importance of rest.

Sometimes, he eludes us, and we call on him.

Because -

Sometimes, he passes, unnoticed.

πŸ‘οΈ πŸ’€ πŸ‘οΈ πŸ’€ πŸ‘οΈ πŸ’€ πŸ‘οΈ πŸ’€

Sleep moves, quiet where breath does not rest

Preferring those who lie still.

It shifts through nothingness

Passing through my hair.

πŸ‘οΈ πŸ’€ πŸ‘οΈ πŸ’€ πŸ‘οΈ πŸ’€ πŸ‘οΈ πŸ’€

At first it comes, a gift to bless

At first, Time stretches, they live precise

Until their shapes seem slow

And faint lines on soft skin,.

πŸ‘οΈ πŸ’€ πŸ‘οΈ πŸ’€ πŸ‘οΈ πŸ’€ πŸ‘οΈ πŸ’€

It seemed Sleep had come to bless

In Time, softened, blurred

As it passed, its darkness cleared

Its edges, etched, now seen.

πŸ‘οΈ πŸ’€ πŸ‘οΈ πŸ’€ πŸ‘οΈ πŸ’€ πŸ‘οΈ πŸ’€

Sleepless Souls bear the sight

Eyes still see, move through air

Yearn for Sleep in nothingness

Then Morning comes. They stare.

πŸ‘οΈ πŸ’€ πŸ‘οΈ πŸ’€ πŸ‘οΈ πŸ’€ πŸ‘οΈ πŸ’€

It should have passed, through their hair.

πŸ‘οΈ πŸ’€ πŸ‘οΈ πŸ’€ πŸ‘οΈ πŸ’€ πŸ‘οΈ πŸ’€

Original poem by Michelle Liew-Kwek Tsui-Lin. AI tags are coincidental.

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About the Creator

Michelle Liew Tsui-Lin

Hi, i am an English Language teacher cum freelance writer with a taste for pets, prose and poetry. When I'm not writing my heart out, I'm playing with my three dogs, Zorra, Cloudy and Snowball.

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  • Sean A.about 2 hours ago

    Is that why I get no sleep? No hair for it to pass through? Just kidding, I know it’s because of my kids - he must be scared of them Great poem!

  • Well written! A good night’s sleep is a great blessing.

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