Critique

The Garden
Once again I have tried to describe all the rooms of a house along with the front porch. I thought one more and it is about the garden in the yard.
By Mark Graham2 years ago in Art
Front Porch
I tried to describe all the rooms in the house from the attic to the basement. Let's move outside to the front porch. Front door
By Mark Graham2 years ago in Art
The Pantry and Closets
There are two rooms of houses that some would really consider rooms but I think I will try to describe. Closets and Pantry
By Mark Graham2 years ago in Art
The Bedroom
The Bedroom is next for I have covered the major rooms of the house. so here goes. Blankets and pillows, electric and regular
By Mark Graham2 years ago in Art
The Bathroom. Content Warning.
I have tried to describe different ways of the various rooms of the houses we live. I have tried to describe the Attic, the Basement, The Kitchen, The Family Living Room. I am going to try 'The Bathroom' and then 'The Bedroom'.
By Mark Graham2 years ago in Art
Family Living Room
We had the Attic, Basement, Kitchen now I am going to attempt the Family Living Room. 'Family Living Room' Familiar things
By Mark Graham2 years ago in Art
The Kitchen
Well, I covered the attic and the basement. I thought now I would try another room of the house. 'The Kitchen' Kleptomania over spices of
By Mark Graham2 years ago in Art
The Basement
To go along with 'The Attic" here is an acrostic about 'The Basement'. Borrowed or old materials that accumulate steadily and
By Mark Graham2 years ago in Art
The Attic
This is not a part of my micro fiction story, but an acrostic I thought for the work itself. Allowing for accumulation of memories
By Mark Graham2 years ago in Art
Trauma Carnival . Top Story - May 2024. Content Warning.
I have unpopular opinions on one of my old favorites, The L Word. First is: Jenny is my favorite character. Second: The show was originally about Jenny, her trauma, her broken identity and the way her sexuality was explored as an awakening that brought up many memories of childhood abuse.
By Melissa Ingoldsby2 years ago in Art
Still another Mehndi
Here is another Mehndi coloring that I completed for I really enjoy doing this form of artwork. The white space in between the designs I used light blue and slightly smudged the color. I used purples, greens , pink and yellows for the flowers and in the center what I thought could be wheat kernels I did in mahogany. Please comment.
By Mark Graham2 years ago in Art
Another Mehndi
Here is another Mehndi coloring that I completed. Sorry for the odd showing my computer moved but most of the drawing is showing. I used light and dark colors in this one and kind of muted the red for the white space around the actual design. I thought the outer border in black and the circle border in light blue was a good contrast. Please comment on this one.
By Mark Graham2 years ago in Art