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Dork Drabbles #17 & 18
On February 27 the question is "Which famous TV family is most like yours? How are you similar? This is a hard one for real families are not perfect and able to solve problems and issues in 30 minutes. If I had to pick one, it would be The Keaton's from 'Family Ties'. Why? Because they were a family that seemed perfect, but the show showed that they were not. They were a complete family for they were not separated, divorced or even close to being a single-parent home. The only similarity to my own is that my parents stayed together.
By Mark Graham5 months ago in Critique
Dork Drabble #15 & 16
The question on February 18 is 'If you won a game show, what would you want your grand prize to be? I believe that most people would want cash or a new car, but I think I would like a menagerie of small items for my home from furniture to appliances or another choice of a grand prize would be a tiny house that seem to be all the rage for some for even now Amazon has tiny houses for sale. That's it a new tiny house as long as it has room for a small library. How about you?
By Mark Graham5 months ago in Critique
Zohran Mamdani announces all-female transition team as he prepares for New York mayoralty
Zohran Mamdani’s incoming administration began taking shape on Wednesday as the New York City mayor-elect announced a transition team to help enact what he called the city’s most ambitious policy platform in a generation, vowing to get right to work when he takes office on 1 January.
By DigitalAddi5 months ago in Critique
A Ring, A Refusal, and Several Fireships
In the summer of 1588, as the Spanish Armada bobbed about the Channel like a parade of very cross breadbins, Her Majesty Elizabeth sat in council with Lord Blackadder and his assistant, Baldrick, who had turned up in a helmet he swore was “sea-proof,” despite being made of turnip.
By Diane Foster5 months ago in Critique
The Monster Under Your Bed Wants to Talk
As children, we're afraid of monsters under the bed; fear of the unknown. But we're told to face our fears because doing so usually means discovering that our fears are far worse in our minds than they turn out to be in reality.
By Jessica Drake5 months ago in Critique
Shadow at the Gate
On my way home from middle school, I spot what might be a possible shortcut to my home. Checking both ways, I cross to the other side of the street and kick the gravel where a sidewalk should be. A canal runs through a field and under the train tracks. Maybe I can go under the train tracks through the canal. That can save me a mile of walking five days a week, technically 180 days a year. That potential shortcut is worth exploring for one day.
By Eileen Davis5 months ago in Critique










