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Winter
Next to autumn I really like the Winter. I love to play in the snow and make snowmen and snow angels, and I even as I said in a comment that I even like shoveling the stuff for it was like making paths to other places. In this 'Before you go' wintertime is the season for making personal growth. Personal growth to me would be trying to learn new ideas and subjects like Physics. This is also a time to reflect on other various things that have happened or maybe making time for new adventures for yourself and others around.
By Mark Grahamabout a year ago in Critique
Autumn season
Autumn, my most favorite time of year with the colorful leaves and brisk cold air. This was a time for raking and playing in the leaves. Now in this 'Before you go' some would say that autumn brings a balance to one's life. I guess it does for with the cooler temperatures I can think more clearly and put all my projects in order from writing to crafts to everyday chores. The days are shorter though and one seems to have to look on how to achieve what needs to be done now or can it wait for another time.
By Mark Grahamabout a year ago in Critique
Summer Days
What does or did the summer season mean to you? In a series of very short articles 'Before You Go' how many of you were able just to relax and enjoy the season. As a child I remember playing all sorts of games, riding my bike and looking forward to the family reunion. As an adult it just seems like any other season except it is very hot and humid in the Deep South and cannot do very much at least for me I was a Northerner most of my life and it was just too darn humid for me.
By Mark Grahamabout a year ago in Critique
Look Who's Calling
Who am I calling? said Teddy E. Bear. Hello, anyone there. Please talk to me for I feel so lonely. No one talked to Teddy. The phone rang again he picked it up said Hello. The person on the other end stated please put another quarter in the slot to keep the connection. Teddy said that he was a bear and had no money. What am I to do? he wondered. He tried to make eye contact with someone that passed by, and wouldn't you know it a child came over and picked him up and they each hugged largely.
By Mark Grahamabout a year ago in Critique
Parents
Patient passionate particular peculiar Parents. (Note: This can describe several types of parents. For aren't there out there patient, particular or peculiar and even parents that are so passionate about being a parent that they hover of their children.)
By Mark Grahamabout a year ago in Critique
Thriller Story " Cooperative Mission"
PROLOGUE: THE TRAGEDY(8 Years ago) 8 years ago a young couple went for a holiday trip in a taxi. With music playing it was very soothing and peaceful. But everything changed in a fraction of a second. Suddenly a truck came from the front and the taxi collided with it and in a flash their dreams were shattered.
By Paravnoor Singh Sethiabout a year ago in Critique
Before you go
Before you go what was the best part of this summer season? For me this was a summer of very hot and humid days that really was not the best part of this summer. I would have to think back to my childhood days for my best parts of summer, so this summer season was just too humid to really enjoy anything with temperatures in the 100's. You cannot bask in the sunshine when it is that nasty hot and humid and you break a sweat just walking slowly to get the mail or walk two dogs around the house.
By Mark Grahamabout a year ago in Critique
