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Smile, smile
Little girl
Don't be vile
Little girls
With little curls
Should always smile
I'm little
And I'm a girl
But I won't smile
In this world
This little girl
It's gonna be bold
Let herself be cold
Whatever she's told
She already feels old
This was my second try at poetry.
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Comments (3)
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Lovely! Congratulations on finishing your second poem. The one thing would be to visually separate out the last lines of commentary with some type of divider. Therefore we can appreciate where the poem ends. Great work!