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Like an Old Oak

I am watching life stories unfold

By Seema PatelPublished about 12 hours ago 1 min read
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Like this old oak,

I watch people,

and their lives quietly unfold.

It was a community

where many families came to live

with dream-filled eyes.

But life gave surprises,

as it always does.

Family 1:

Man got can cancer diagnosis,

kid dropped out from college,

they sold house, moved away.

Family 2:

Old parents got sick,

over care cost,

inheritance, responsibility,

this family moved to apartment.

Family 3:

Marital issue reared ugly head,

divorce came inevitably,

family split, selling house.

We can plan as much as we like,

what trajectory, life will follow,

is not in our control,

that's what I learned.

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About the Creator

Seema Patel

I am Seema. I contribute to PubMed, Blogger, Medium, LinkedIn, Substack, Amazon KDP, Vocal Media.

I write on nature, health, parenting, creativity, gardening, social issues.

My art shop: https://artsforhealinggifts.etsy.com

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  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarranabout 9 hours ago

    Yes, no matter how much we plan, what's meant to happen will happen

  • Mother Combsabout 10 hours ago

    No one can plan completely for the future. We're lucky if nothing pops up to upset our plans, but something is sure to

  • Habib Rehmanabout 12 hours ago

    your thoughts are heart touching and your words are amazing

  • George’s Girl 2026 about 12 hours ago

    Wow this has to be a top story it is excellent🦋🦋🦋🦋

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